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paradise
04-14-2005, 5:54 PM
Just got my new monitor (NEC 19") :) and tried a redo of a recent photo. What do you think, quality and presentation wise.

First one

Old one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/gallery/LA%20Zoo%20April%2005/General/LAZoo-08.jpg

New one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/LAZoo-08.jpg

Another one

Old one:
http://aquatic-photography.com/pics/gallery/LA%20Zoo%20April%2005/Wolves/LAZoo-wolf04.jpg

New one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/LAZoo-wolf04.jpg

Last one

Old one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/gallery/LA%20Zoo%20April%2005/General/LAZoo-11.jpg

New one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/LAZoo-11.jpg

Obliviou$
04-14-2005, 6:48 PM
The first one get's to yellow, so I like the old version the best.
But the other two is much better, great work Ed :)

hir0
04-14-2005, 6:49 PM
nice job with the pp Ed. very effective background work.

JerseyJay
04-14-2005, 11:19 PM
Ed,

Not sure what you did but I only like the edited version of the wolf. Other two are either off color, not sharp enough or lacking shadows.

Peligrin
04-14-2005, 11:23 PM
Which is the truer color on the first one? The new pics on the last two have much better bokeh (at last I understand what that word means! :-D ). Congrats on the new monitor!

RazorBlade
04-15-2005, 5:22 AM
Interesting edits.

The 1st one ... um, not sure what's the actual colour, so I can't say. But on the Edited version, the yellow on the beak is a bit too strong. But an interesting portrayal of PS editing. :)

#2 - I like the new one! Definitely better than the old one.

#3 - The new one looks more natural, but the colour looks off.

Oh ... and does "bokeh" = lens? :S

paradise
04-15-2005, 10:29 AM
Agree with you guys on the first one. I think I was trying to fix the blue tint on the original and doing it from scratch, did not go the right way. So this time I fixed the original. What do you think?

Old one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/gallery/LA%20Zoo%20April%2005/General/LAZoo-08.jpg

New one:
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/LAZoo-08.jpg

New one (fixed):
http://www.aquatic-photography.com/pics/LAZoo-08b.jpg

Obliviou$
04-15-2005, 12:28 PM
Much better, but still a tad to much yellow.

Peligrin
04-15-2005, 12:57 PM
Much, much better! Is that his true color?

paradise
04-15-2005, 1:07 PM
Yeah, it's as close as I see it really is. The original one was too blue. The 2nd one was too yellow uniformly. This one has better contrast, and is not oversaturated.

hir0
04-15-2005, 1:20 PM
i don't know what the bird is supposed to look like, but you could use the lasso tool - and ONLY change the beaks color if you wanted to.

Ibn
04-15-2005, 1:27 PM
Also, what does it look like if you were to combine both of them (first being too blue and second being too yellow)?