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Obliviou$
10-25-2005, 6:17 PM
People of today live a hectic life, and I mean hectic. There are few hours a day we can just sit back and chill.
There's no "singing in the rain" anymore.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/AlexChristensen/motion.jpg
I just walked around the house with my camera, had a sick day.. Spotted this girl running outside, and the umbrella caught my attention. So, snapped a photo, on manual setting, tried an artistic approach.
Just playing around :)
phishphorphun
10-25-2005, 7:38 PM
Yeah, that's wild how your script got caught in the wind too. :-D
Obliviou$
10-26-2005, 2:48 AM
Yeah, blurred the script...Should I unblur it maybe?
alanhill
10-26-2005, 3:41 PM
I like the script.
It was a good idea to get your model to wear red socks - the photo wouldn't work as well without them ;) I think the photo could be a little lighter overall without reducing the impression of the weather.
Alan
Obliviou$
10-26-2005, 5:35 PM
What do you mean by lighter?
And yeah, I should thank her for doing so..Don't have the slightest clue of who she is though :confused:
Thank you for the feedback Alan, appreciate it.
alanhill
10-27-2005, 5:46 PM
What do you mean by lighter?
I mean adjust Levels or Curves to get a few more pale grey and mid grey tones: almost everything is dark to very dark here.
Alan
Agreed with what Alan has said. Great picture overall (including the blurred script), but it would work better if it was slightly lighter (lost of details in the shoulders and above region).
Obliviou$
10-28-2005, 8:59 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/AlexChristensen/motion_e2.jpg
More like this or a place in between?
Feel free to give it a shot!
alanhill
10-28-2005, 2:21 PM
In-between I think - I'm never satisfied, am I? :rolleyes:
Perhaps if you just lightened the greens and cyans - I don't like the change in the umbrella.
Alan