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Obliviou$
03-26-2006, 9:51 AM
I've heard Apple makes great music players...Can't get that damn thing to work though!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/AlexChristensen/Apple.jpg
hahaa, nice concept and great excecution. bg is a little gray in some areas tho.
Obliviou$
03-26-2006, 1:02 PM
Thanks hir0. I wasn't going for an all-white. Thought toning it down a little would make it more comfortable.
Almost unedited piece :)
JerseyJay
03-26-2006, 3:07 PM
Interesting concept.
However I have to agree with Hir0. That gray right corner is counterproductive and it kind of looks like vignetting problem but I'm sure it is not.
The other thing that kind of looks out of place are multiple light sources very visible on the skin of the apple, especially one right in the middle.
Obliviou$
03-26-2006, 3:51 PM
Thanks! Better?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/AlexChristensen/Apple_v2.jpg
JerseyJay
03-26-2006, 3:55 PM
Thanks! Better?
IMO, better !
squidfish
03-28-2006, 5:10 AM
I saw the title of this shot and knew it was going to be an Alex photograph :)
Clever concept and the suggested improvements by Jay have worked well.
How many 'bites' can you get on a standard apple :).
Cheers
Rich
Much better! Might want to choose a healthier apple next time though, haha. Looks like it's bruised on the left side.
fotografa
01-17-2008, 5:30 PM
I enjoy the concept in your photo, great idea!
I would change ONE thing though. The left side of the photograph is a bit dark so take a sheet of white paper and hold it up next the dark side of the apple for some added light on that side, it needs a bit of brightening.